http://www.jscribes.com/a-fresh-life/ A forum for Jewish fiction and poetry Fri, 14 Jan 2011 02:18:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 http://www.jscribes.com/a-fresh-life/comment-page-1/#comment-394 Di Sat, 20 Mar 2010 05:26:24 +0000 http://www.jscribes.com/?p=1420#comment-394 I agree with Bekki. I was disappointed when it ended. I wanted to know more. Where was it going? How was Jill going to deal with her father? Who is this best friend of her mother? This was a wonderful story Nina. Finally I had a chance to read your writing. You should be very proud of yourself! Di I agree with Bekki. I was disappointed when it ended. I wanted to know more. Where was it going? How was Jill going to deal with her father? Who is this best friend of her mother? This was a wonderful story Nina. Finally I had a chance to read your writing. You should be very proud of yourself! Di

]]> http://www.jscribes.com/a-fresh-life/comment-page-1/#comment-336 Bekki Tue, 09 Feb 2010 01:35:10 +0000 http://www.jscribes.com/?p=1420#comment-336 I love how you wrapped all these complex characters and history into a short story. It definitely makes me want to read a book to find out more! I love how you wrapped all these complex characters and history into a short story. It definitely makes me want to read a book to find out more!

]]> http://www.jscribes.com/a-fresh-life/comment-page-1/#comment-334 Karen Sun, 07 Feb 2010 17:07:10 +0000 http://www.jscribes.com/?p=1420#comment-334 This was an awesome story!! I am very proud of you. This was an awesome story!! I am very proud of you.

]]> http://www.jscribes.com/a-fresh-life/comment-page-1/#comment-333 Elizabeth Laukka Sun, 07 Feb 2010 03:42:46 +0000 http://www.jscribes.com/?p=1420#comment-333 GIfted writer! I wanted to read more and felt like I knew the characters. It almost sounds biographical - it is so personal-feeling. Is Phyllis a real person and did she really write that cook book? I want to know. Great insights on current culture. GIfted writer! I wanted to read more and felt like I knew the characters. It almost sounds biographical – it is so personal-feeling. Is Phyllis a real person and did she really write that cook book? I want to know. Great insights on current culture.

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